Do you like this story board?

ok this funky, but smart tomboy chick plays the cello,and she ends up tutoring this guy, the "bad boy" and at the start shes like, "oh no" but she gets to know him and catches him play ing the piano, and they fall in love and so on....oh and how do you like the names Lorelei Avery, and Tony Miller....and if you have suggestions I WOULD LOVE THEM!!